abstract poetry
electricity stirs the air as she walks by
stirs the air as she walks by? the air is stirred by her
waves crash down when she moves her hair
crash down when she moves? waves of emotion is she
a solar flare cannot compare her eye’s enduring embrace
compare her eye’s enduring embrace? never before or after, again to never.
Feeling with the hand that you dont have, but has you
that is the heart
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March 12th, 2007 at 9:28 am
did you write that?
seeing as i’m sick and on bed rest i have nothing better to do than stalk my friends.
cya when i’m healthy and back on campus
March 12th, 2007 at 9:00 pm
Yea, I wrote that…hope you feel better! Seeya soon
March 26th, 2007 at 9:28 am
It must be good, because I cant figure it out just like all those other classic poems we read in 12th grade. I think its about love or something
May 30th, 2007 at 2:03 pm
I think it’s about wind:
line 1: air, duh
line 2: air, still duh
line 3: waves, waves move and make air–something about the moon i think
line 4: crash, well the waves crash
line 5: solar flare, solar winds, seee
line 6: i think you’re just trying to get word count here
line 7: token “i’m in touch with my heart” line here